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I feel the end of life,
I feel the cold of death,
But there is something i want to say,
With my last bit of breath.
I have to say i loved you,
I have to say i cared,
But these feelings with you,
I never could of shared.
I'm sorry for the pain,
And the trouble i've put you through,
Now i've said my words,
There is something i must do.
A noose around my neck,
A bullet through my head,
It doesnt really matter,
As long as i am dead.
I'll jump a cliff,
And let my body fly,
I have to say just one last thing,
Reasons can't explain why,
All i have to say is,
I love you,
Goodbye...
©2005-2009 ~suicidal-living
:iconsuicidal-living:

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A poem about loving someone and finding the cure to stop....

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:iconemo-fae:
I liked it. You probably could've done something a little more creative at the end. But you did get the point across...although i'm not an expert on poetry so do whatever. It was good though. Props! ;)
:iconsuicidal-living:
thanx im pretty bad at poetry and i was bored in class so yeah.....
:iconspiritsofthenight:
i think its really good. +++ :)

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